Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Neighbour,
I am writing this letter to apologise you for the sound from my house which has caused you some sort of distress.This sound has also created a lots of problems to you like stress and uncomfortableness. I, from the bottom of my heart apologise. I assure you not to cause you any more problems.
However, the reason behind such a noise was fixing the tiles on my walls. due to rainy season coming nearby, I need to fix my walls. As all my walls has been drained. walls of the house are fully destroyed and damaged.This loud noise was also due to hammer banging by plumbers.
Perhaps, I am a working woman, couldn't able to be at home during day times. For that reason, the work is held at evening times when I come back from work. However,the work is delaying as the workers work for only two hours in evening.
I assure you that the work will be completed as early as possible and you will not be troubled anymore.
I hope you accept my apology and I am really sorry once again.
Yours Truly,
Kenda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ch has caused you some sort of distress.This sound has also created a lots of probl...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you some sort of distress.This sound has also created a lots of problems to you l...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...f distress.This sound has also created a lots of problems to you like stress and unco...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you not to cause you any more problems. However, the reason behind such a noise ...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...noise was fixing the tiles on my walls. due to rainy season coming nearby, I need t...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... coming nearby, I need to fix my walls. As all my walls has been drained. walls of...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Walls
...alls. As all my walls has been drained. walls of the house are fully destroyed and da...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...e house are fully destroyed and damaged.This loud noise was also due to hammer bangi...
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Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ers. Perhaps, I am a working woman, couldnt able to be at home during day times. Fo...
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Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...imes when I come back from work. However,the work is delaying as the workers work fo...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...once again. Yours Truly, Kenda
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51322751323 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50079352486 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8370013507 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215114430057 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705519815339 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667544906354 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088062965823 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531114731391 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.