Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

• explain the reasons for the noise

• apologise

• describe what action you will take

Dear Tom

I have received you letter today first of all I am very thankful to you for raising your concern In a so humble way. Yesterday my brother younger brother get graduation degree from in university on the precious occasion his friend gather in my flat. We have a plan to serve them with drink and tradition foods of our home town but the gathering convert into songs party which create noise and caused of disturbance for our neighbor’s. We decided that next time we will arrange this type of function in some bars or out of residence area where no one get disturb with noise.

I am really sorry for our act which disturb your peace. You will not bear this type of disturbance from our side.

Thanks

Muhammad Junaid

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f disturbance from our side. Thanks Muhammad Junaid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 620.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44793113676 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719696969697 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7545441838 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199809394951 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845583238392 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782921639636 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168417780988 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00230774890683 0.0580467560999 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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