Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

• explain the reasons for the noise

• apologise

• describe what action you will take

Dear Johnson,

Am really sorry for the in convenience caused due to the noise coming from my flat to you and your family, AM writing this letter to explain you the reason for the noise and action to be taken from my side to avoid the noise hence forth. Please accept my apologies.

We are renovation our kitchen recently and I have I have hired a contractor to fix the kitchen issues.And you the repair work would include the drilling and hammering work, I have handed over the keys to contractor to finish the work faster and am not aware for the disturbance caused to you. AM sure the work will end up in next 2 days and there will not be any more noise and I will suggest my contractor not to use sound making machines before 8 AM and in the evenings so that there will be peaceful work carried out.

I appreciate you for writing to me and explaining the problem so that I can take the action in the early stage to avoid the more noise disturbances.

Once again sorry for troubling you and thank you for understanding

Thank you.

Vedaprada

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Johnson, Am really sorry for the in convenience c...
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...ng from my flat to you and your family, AM writing this letter to explain you the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...son for the noise and action to be taken from my side to avoid the noise hence fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ce forth. Please accept my apologies. We are renovation our kitchen recently a...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'I have'.
Suggestion: I have
...are renovation our kitchen recently and I have I have hired a contractor to fix the kitchen i...
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Suggestion: And
... a contractor to fix the kitchen issues.And you the repair work would include the ...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e kitchen issues.And you the repair work would include the drilling and hammering...
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...machines before 8 AM and in the evenings so that there will be peaceful work carr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42068665173 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0247677429 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317494217852 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140028093486 0.0766984524023 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108600448347 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186908267008 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821274434495 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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