Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
Dear Luis
I have received a letter from you about a several noises in my flat. For that reason, I have decided to explain the problem in this short letter.
The last week, a filtration caused a serious damaged in my kitchen, because of that, I have to hired a group of professional to break the whole sidewall to find the filtration and fix it.
I think the noise was for the reparations that started four days ago. I sincerely apologize, it wasn't my intention to cause any problem, but it was unexpected and I didn’t have time to let you know, it was kind of emergency.
I would like to talk to you about what time is ok for continue with the reparations, it is possible.
I hope this situation won't break the good relationship we have for the past ten years.
One more time, I'm so sorry for all the inconvenient.
Sincerely
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...our days ago. I sincerely apologize, it wasnt my intention to cause any problem, but ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...et you know, it was kind of emergency. I would like to talk to you about what ti...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with the reparations, it is possible. I hope this situation wont break the good...
^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...for the past ten years. One more time, Im so sorry for all the inconvenient. Sin...
^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rry for all the inconvenient. Sincerely Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as for, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45806451613 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64803934694 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7579053419 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196495715259 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821422321088 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796845602062 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978818875472 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101789393966 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.