Your next door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night.
Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Including your leather:
- Your reason for writing
- What you would like to happen
- A nice, respectful style
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am your next door neighbor and writing to complain about your dog.
First of all, as you might know, I am a full time employee, which means that I work hard throughout the day, hoping that to have a nice, calm evening at my property. However, whenever I try to relax, your dog starts barking too loudly that makes it difficult for me to take a rest. As a matter of fact, As soon as I arrive home, your dog's barking irritates not only me, but also other neighbors as well.
Secondly, keeping a dog in small apartments like ours is against the law, so that one is not allowed to keep pets, particulary dogs, in this area of the city.
Consequently, I would like to request that either think of another place to keep it or make a special room for it in order not to make any noise at late hours of the day.
I hope this letter will not create any ill feelings between us and we can remain good neighbors as always.
Regards,
Jeff Anderson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...First of all, as you might know, I am a full time employee, which means that I work hard ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 100, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... us and we can remain good neighbors as always. Regards, Jeff Anderson
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33879781421 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27565286388 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1163426598 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 4.34317383033 305% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35861160122 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133354512352 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130958251244 0.0603063233224 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19241038889 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1801414496 0.0580467560999 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.