1. Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
It is often argued that because health plays a vital role in everyone’s lives, profit-oriented manufacturers should not be allowed to run medical services. In my opinion, I am in favor of this viewpoint for a variety of reasons.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that private healthcare services have brought people certain valuable benefits. Firstly, they share responsibilities with state health systems in taking care of public’s health. For instance, a significant increase of private health systems runs parallel with a considerable decline in pressure on an overload of patients and finance as well as insufficient infrastructure and well-qualified doctors. Secondly, profit-yielding clinics have shorter waiting lists for operation and appointment so it creates a more professional environment. Finally, this kind of supplying care is more appropriate for wealthy citizenships who want to pay for personal services.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that private healthcare exerts more pernicious impacts than positive ones. It has impractical feature because the cost of treatment is often higher than ones with subsidized by governments, which means that only the rich can afford it. This would result in an unfair society and lengthen the gap between the rich and the poor in society. Furthermore, it is intricate to control treatment process as patients are sometimes forced to practice unnecessary tests to raise the cost of treatment and earning for unethical doctors.
In conclusion, although some people have their belief on profit-making companies, I personally reckon that such sensitive issue should be under controlled by authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58039215686 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28343271766 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.679301316 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230535973115 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725265152515 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726672718932 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139710952791 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07722822074 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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