1. Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that news is of no relevance to our life, therefore, spending time on updating news via means of media coverage is extremely extravagant. Personally, I partly advocate with this statement.
On the one hand, for the general public, several of news are becoming incongruous with people’s predilection, which is education, healthcare, and economics. Hardly will citizens pay attention to extraneous information to their daily life. For example, except for people related to the fashion industry, rarely are others interested in fashion trends or iconic colors of the year because a myriad of people often wears clothes contingent on their bodies and career attributes. However, journalists usually broadcast these kinds of news by using celebrities' influence to bombard readers for profit margins based on their bias to their idol not for their demands.
On the contrary, news plays a paramount role for everyone to be apprised of the current state of affairs and how to avoid it. For instance, should people watch TV, will not they comprehend of government policy on social quarantine because of the highly infectious of coronavirus. More specifically, after reading news about the outbreak of an epidemic and the authorities’ decisions, people may immediately prepare food for fear of the possibility of food shortages and self-isolation while they are staying at home.
In conclusion, although it is difficult to deny that it is not easy to relate information provided by the news and people’s life in most cases, humans should not be completely reluctant from reading the newspaper and watching TV programs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is argued that news is of no relevance ...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...is statement. On the one hand, for the general public, several of news are becoming incongruo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32170542636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99225057236 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0745519517 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288473136222 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10056753623 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566636455693 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16946178968 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314801611499 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.