16/1/2020: Nowadays it is not only large companies that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In a technology-driven world, not only large companies but virtually anyone can make visual art products such as films. Some people think that it is a positive development while others believe it has negative impacts on the young. I agree that it has both pros and cons.
On one hand, producing films easily gives a significant boost to the film industry by taking advantage of technology development. The entertainment market grows quickly due to the fact that producers can create a bunch of different types of movies and videos. Artists can then post the content on social media such as Facebook, Youtube and Tik Tok that viewers can choose freely and enjoy without paying a lot of money, though, those low budget films still earn a huge amount of money and fame. “Story of Chussie” is a telling example. Although this Vietnamese short film just lasts 30 minutes, uses an amateur actor, was shot entirely with an iPhone 7, and presented as found footage from that old man, it broke the record for views and became famous. Once more movies and videos were made, a few new jobs appeared and that helps solve the unemployment problem. For instance, a freelancer who has 100,000 views on Youtube can earn at least 200 dollars per month. Moreover, for people who have tight budgets, especially young filmmakers, it is really an opportunity to develop their potential in this aspect.
Sadly enough, some movies are really low-quality and include uncensored, even sexual, pornographic and violent scenes which affect children’s and youngsters’ s behaviours. For example, a series of schoolgirls in Vietnam committed suicide after watching a weird creepy video on the internet named “The curse of Connie”.
In view of what was mentioned above, obviously, when everyone is able to produce films, it creates both advantages and disadvantages but somehow the advantages win out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10967741935 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77820415273 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706451612903 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.229192543 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217605516556 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596996778223 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678769765832 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110412538222 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958561630473 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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