2.The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are effects on people living in these city? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people?
It is true that in this modern era, the population density among urban areas is increasingly high. While this tendency has an adverse bearing on the lives of citizens who live in those areas, the governments could take several steps to tackle this problem.
To begin with, overcrowded cities are often more air-polluted than the other regions. This is because ones who live in those areas usually have their own private vehicles, such as cars or motorbikes. Hanoi, for instance, is ranked one of the cities that have an alarming rate of polluted air since each household would have at least 2 to 3 motorbikes and a private car. Polluted atmosphere as a result would have detrimental effects on the cities dwellers’ health, causing lung diseases.
While this problem could lead to severe consequences, government bodies could take measures to solve it. The first one is raising taxes on private transportation and decreasing public transports fees. This would provide incentives for their citizens to utilize buses and subways rather than private cars. American authorities has implemented several policies that put high taxes on petroleum private cars, for example. Another solution could be allocating resources to offer cities dwellers with public bikes with no extra costs. This could not only mitigate air pollution but also encourage individuals to do exercises and stay healthy. If people could do exercises regularly in clean and fresh air, their health will improve, which helps them to maintain high life quality.
In conclusion, while rapid growth among metropolitan areas could have a negative effect on people’s health, national and local authorities could enforce laws and provide resources to improve the situation, as well as to keep their citizens’ life at good quality.
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- 2 The population of many cities is growing rapidly What are effects on people living in these city What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28671328671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69735246189 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6923725401 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123802944822 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414694688904 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381457445023 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761751541859 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189057148535 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.