8. Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
It is true that environmental issues have been becoming worse in these days because of human activities. There are steps can definitely be taken by governments and individuals to tackle the problems.
In my opinion, air pollution and deforestation are the two main ways that damage the environment. Firstly, humans drive various vehicles for transportation and eat millions of livestock for living on a daily base, which would produce tons of harmful gases into the air. Further, forests are disappearing in recent years because factories and construction areas need woods to operate.
Governments can take actions to deal with the problems mentioned above. On the one hand, strict rules and laws need to enforce to regulate firms and business giants to take their responsibilities for reducing the damages on the environment. On the other hand, more money should be reallocated from other areas to environmental protections, implementing actions such as planting more trees, encouraging the use of alternative energy sources and purifying waters.
At the same time, individuals can make a difference in working with governments. Everyone in the world should be aware of the severity of environmental issues and make some changes about current lifestyles. For example, residents can choose to take public transportation more often and there will be less and less private cars on the road and an increasing number of people also decide not to eat or eat less meat. All of those movements will certainly cut down the emission of greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, both government and individuals need to fight together to prevent our planet from destroying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3536121673 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05882606435 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4633461818 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16652825413 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588274626604 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515843063415 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873063560819 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346606142917 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.