The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
In this day and age, an increasing amount of public news being considered detrimental has been a controversial issue. In my opinion, there would be some reasons for this and mixing both positive and negative news should be a good solution for this problem.
To commence with, there are a number of reasons leading the negative news to be selected to report, The first reason would be reporting on bad issues informs about potential dangers that often have significant effects on the population. Since these issues helps to raise citizens’ awareness, they could be welcomed widely. A typical example of this would be last month, thanks to the news about a disease case of “bach hau” leading to the death of a female, Vietnamese residents have became more careful in getting avoid of suffering this dangerous disease. An another reason is that many media outlets want to have higher ratings and viewership to gain increased advertising revenue. Therefore, by publicing bad news, they could attract a large number of readers and reach their business goals.
In addition to the above analysis, I believe that a balance of positive and negative news should be done in producing news. This is because reporting both good and bas news could provide a more accurate and comprehensive view of the world, which helps the readers to improve their knowledge on every side of lives. VNExpress, for example, is known as the most renowned online new page because of posting many necessary news, with both bad and good ones, for Vietnamese people to take in the information. As a result, since having a wide knowledge, each individuals would have a general view about things occurred in over the world.
In conclusion, there are many causes of the widespread bad news and I am of the opinion that news should be a balance of both positive and negative ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... of a female, Vietnamese residents have became more careful in getting avoid of suffer...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: A reason; Another reason
...id of suffering this dangerous disease. An another reason is that many media outlets want to have...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... publicing bad news, they could attract a large number of readers and reach their business goals....
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
.... In addition to the above analysis, I believe that a balance of positive and ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...y causes of the widespread bad news and I am of the opinion that news should be a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93290734824 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61936799853 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2036810005 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338725553762 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141803258277 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10212357887 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253246810526 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598450040789 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.