Advance in artificial intelligence has developed quickly Computers can translate very confidently To what extent do you think studying a foreign language is unnecessary

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Advance in artificial intelligence has developed quickly. Computers can translate very confidently. To what extent do you think studying a foreign language is unnecessary?

Artificial Intelligence has been advanced to the point that computers can confidently translate different languages. However, it does not mean that the need to learn foreign languages is reduced. Instead, I believe that people should learn at least one language other than their mother tongue.
The first reason is learning foreign languages bring out many benefits to the learners. For instance, knowing a new language gives you the chance to approach and comprehend new cultures, history and customs. The machine is not yet able to convey such complicated matters to the user. In addition, being bilingual or multilingual mean you can easily connect with more people, which in turn will yield more opportunities in later life. Hence, people with the ability to speak in different languages generally have more competitive advances in the current job market.
Even though there are extreme advances in computer science in recent years, machine translation is still inaccurate. Even Google Translate, one of the most popular machine-translating tools, can mainly translate simple words without contextual meaning. More often than most, it gives out erroneous results in the cases of complex phrases such as idioms or long sentences. Sometimes the auto-translated words have different meanings than what you want to say. I do not think that many people want to be put in such embarrassing situations.
In conclusion, while computerised translations are helpful, I strongly believe that they cannot replace the need for learning a foreign language. Also, machine translations are often inaccurate and might cause unwanted misunderstandings.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58947368421 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08568314044 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694736842105 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.07269978 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269254021806 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987618148088 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818254946391 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158112612443 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489359533613 0.0609392437508 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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