With advances in technology, many workers now have the option to work from home.
Is this a positive development?
The issue of employees isn't necessary to work in the companies due to the developments of technology has been heatedly debated by pubic nigh on a half-decade. Some people feel that it has negative effects; however, I am of the opinion that ones benefit from the evolutions. In the following paragraphs, I will explore rationales for my own viewpoint on the matter.
The primary reason, as I see it, the thrive of online store markedly eliminate operating costs. Due to the necessity of payment such as rent, bills, and decorations, the number of physical shops transfers to the internet and the employers are available to work at their own house. As an illustration, a variety of social media and its functions, such as live stream. For instance, Notorious which is the most famous fitness production company in Taipei has benefited over a million dollars from online sales. In fact, it makes a massive profit due to the reductions in rental fees.
Not only the previous familiarity technology to lead to well profits, but also the utilization of environmental protections. Indeed, just last month, Taiwan semiconductor manufacturing company invents wireless controlled equipment to investigate the average discarded plastic trashes located on the beaches. Unsurprisingly, it's more effective to manipulate at home than visiting the places in person. Hence, there's a bunch of availability to keep the environment from destruction by using the remote control at home.
To sum up, according to the above statements, I maintain that working at home with advanced technology have a bunch of advantages. In the future, I sincerely wish that employing at home can be a trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19926199262 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09152868297 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1386219992 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173866441158 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497081251875 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674876912225 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106479798485 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693721366003 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.