In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having an own property is more crucial than renting a house in a different culture. If asked to speak my mind on this discussion, one of the reasons is the traditional concept and it brings some drawbacks to our society.
It’s undeniable that judging a person by his assets is the best way to classify the identities. This conventional idea has passed on our generations and become a stereotype. Take a relevant case as an example, several hundred years ago, a successful businessman who owns massive properties and wealth has had better ability to take care of his family; on the other hand, a person who lives in a rental house has indicated his lower identity. Therefore, before building a close relationship with unfamiliar friends, investigating their backgrounds such as economic status usually happened during the conversations.
Turning into the effects, buying a private house is a stressful decision for some groups. For people who don’t have adequate budgets to purchase real estate, they have to sacrifice entertaining expenses such as watching movies, traveling abroad, and singing karaoke to subsidize saving. For instance, many businessmen deny having a short-term trip to other cities in their spare time if the cost beyond their expectations because of the goal of owning a house. Moreover, some of them have intentions to loan a bunch of money from banks and the interest turns into another pressure eventually.
To sum up, according to the above statements, owning a private construction symbolize your social status; however, it brings a lot of unnecessary burdens if you don’t have enough finance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21292775665 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9370057845 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669201520913 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6092887276 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138158503485 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489315054936 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351084697762 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815099937217 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463890709877 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.