advantages and disadvantages
In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper book.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, the number of readers that prefer e-book are gradually increasing, while the number of paper book readers has been decrease. E-books are really effective to use instead of the traditional way. So, this essay will firstly, discuss why paper book readers see that e-book is not the best choice to use and secondly, talk about why some people see that e-book is the best way to read books in these days
First, e-book is not ideal for old-school readers because of a several reasons. For example, it can be hazardous to eyesight due to reading on phones and computers with devastating screens to read it. In result, it will be leading a generation with vision problems. Additionally, it has an illegal aspect due to presence of pirated book on the internet. As a consequence of piracy, it will cause a lot of financially losses. In contrast, paper book does not affect eyesight in the same way.
On the other hand, all the problems can be solved. to Illustrate, amazon sells reading device called Kindle that does not have harmful screens. So, anyone can read e-book without having a problem. And also, it is easy to carry it in any place without get worry about the space or get ruin like papers. Moreover, many e-books have copyrights, which prevents hacking and any type of financially losses.
In conclusion, e-books will likely show some upward trend on the future compared to paper books. In my opinion, if a reader wants to enjoy reading. they should to read in paper books. But if they need an easier way to read without wasting time. E-book will be perfect for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7311827957 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4479315881 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6913072789 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216430205727 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660391141306 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551505819886 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134528162457 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537156573592 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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