Advertising has become an unavoidable part of
everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
In the present, with the rapid development of technology, the art of advertising has also evolved. Some may argue that it has a positive impact on us, while some may disagree. I believe that advertising has a negative effect on our daily lives as it encourages us to buy items we do not need.
As some argue, they are some positive aspects of commercials. They can introduce new products to customers, which can help reduce the workload of their day-to-day lives. For example, a multipurpose blender can be efficient in buys households. It can assist in making healthy foods such as soups and smoothies. Another advantage of advertisements is that we customers can compare the price and find the best deal. Using the same blender example, if two companies are selling similar products. We can watch both advertisements can pick out the one that works best with our lifestyle.
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wever, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. The most common penalty is false advertising. Several marketing strategies are used to grab the attention of the customer and mislead them. For example, a company can display a commercial for a car with a deal that is too good to be true. However, there are terms and conditions the customer blindly agrees to that end up being a complete rip-off. Another downside of these marketing strategies is convincing people to buy items they do not need. A multipurpose knife can be stated as an example. It can be advertised as a knife that is exceptionally sharp and better than ordinary knives when in reality, it serves the same purpose.
There have been some shocking evolutions in the world of marketing in the past few decades. However, I believe that advertisements tend to deliver more downsides, and hence the pros get far outweighed by the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86092715232 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81130312993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 302.0 20.2975951904 1488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1468.0 106.682146367 1376% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 302.0 20.7667163134 1454% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 62.0 7.06120827912 878% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145724905108 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145724905108 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962423346538 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050082097385 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.5 13.0946893788 1165% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -235.05 50.2224549098 -468% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.1 11.3001002004 1072% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.17 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.8 10.1190380762 1214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 123.0 10.7795591182 1141% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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