Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education and growing a child have played a crucial role on society at all time. It is important to say that education is a substantial subject for every piece of society from family -which is basic part of society- to governments. Because people, who are well-educated and conscious, may change the destiny of countries and the world as well. I am of opinion that although there is some opposite view, teachers have to educate students not only to be successful person, but also to be an honest and fair person.
It is first reason to do not educate student only academically that entire societies and countries need scholars and professionals but they also need basically well-liked people who are conscious, truthful and respectful. People who are very talent, wealthy and also well-educated, for instance, can succeed a lot of field. However, if they do not have a precious personal identity, they cannot assist development of society. Because they are not reliable people. It is worth emphasizing that people should primarily learn to be a good human.
It is easily considered that academic education, on the other hand, is important in terms of awareness of society, so that the developments of world need scholars and professionals such as scientists, successful entrepreneurs, engineers and doctors et cetera. In this regards, it plays an important role on health of society that people should be educated with both academically and socially. I believe that perhaps, the world would have been more livable, peaceful and equitable if teachers and education systems had taken importance to educate students both academically and socially as much as they could.
In conclusion, we can say easily that if teachers educate students considering them as their own children, it would be true way to guarantee people taken a precious education. It should not be forgotten that children are our future and they are basic part of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of fields'.
Suggestion: a lot of fields
...ell-educated, for instance, can succeed a lot of field. However, if they do not have a preciou...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y cannot assist development of society. Because they are not reliable people. It is wor...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rs, engineers and doctors et cetera. In this regards, it plays an important role on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15457413249 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93782492894 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3752675708 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264165211409 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904875122301 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052610853466 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168299581444 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198775026279 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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