All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that cars, which use fossil fuels to run, need to be banned and give way for electric cars. I completely agree with this idea because traditional cars have severe impacts on environment and electric cars need less money to operate.
On the one hand, cars, which are operated by fossil fuels, are not environmentally friendly, so they must be banned. The reason why those cars are not environmentally friendly is that they eliminate too much emissions. Unfortunately, the emission of cars is cause of climate changes. For example, greenhouse effect stemming from CO2 is a dangerous phenomenon, which leads to many negative impacts on the Earth’s ecosystems. The use of traditional cars affects the environment discouragingly.
On the other hand, less money needs to be paid when people electric cars; thus, they are able to replace normal cars. Electric cars can be used instead of traditional cars because services for them are cheaper. Those car owners, therefore, can save money for various purposes else. For instance, People having electric cars often have savings, which might be used to improve their careers or donate for charities and so on. By the affordable prices of services, electric cars bring about many benefits.
In conclusion, I agree that cars burning fossil fuels should be banned and using electric cars as a replacement .Because cars burning fossil fuels are not good for environment, and the cost of operating electric cars is cheaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17012448133 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80779524242 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7090057435 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8461538462 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395616970186 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143828962191 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139796604118 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292256890045 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174248349144 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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