All criminals should be punished and have a salary cap from the moment they convicted of their crime, others believe they should be given a second chance and be allowed to earn whatever they can. What do you think? Give reasons and examples to support your position
It has been universally that problem of all criminals should be punished or not is escalating at an alarming rate.This problem is bringing state of depression among the mases and in economy too.There is a plethora of reasons and solutions can be suggested to which are discussed as follows.
In regards to the problem; The major of the issue which criminals should be punished or not .As fact knows .convects should be punished How ever ;because they are steal schools; Banks and hospitals this can influence the public badly on the other hand. Government should judge them because people rooted in police man and law.
Seeing the problem with bright side more over ; many of solutions can be helpful to curb the menace .For instance; The government should give a fruitful salary although; to people as they can encourage them not to steal and not no use drugs cause youth people are pivotal to the society .As a consequence the finance and will be safe and society can communicate with each other in a safety way.
To conclude; solving a global issue is not easy but with the joint efforts of people; a control can be taken .I believe that everyone should come forward to mitigate the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80288461538 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49747016065 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.758247944 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.8 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315460084729 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163276510468 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748097687954 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186764518291 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441428921622 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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