A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Nowadays, it is argued that tourism is an excellent source of income for many countries on our planet. However, this business can cause a lot of issues in case it is not properly organized. This essay will, firstly, discuss profits from tourism as one of the main benefits of this and secondly, outline the drawbacks of the arguing tendency before making a final note.
To start with, one of the most principle advantages of the travelling business for a certain state is the amount of new workplaces that it generates for the native population. A lot of companies and hotels need to hire more people in order to provide tourists with decent accommodation, catering and transportation. A prime example of this is the recent BBC Arabic article, which revealed that Egypt has two and a half million people working in the tourism service industry. This has resulted in reducing unemployment and increasing the country’s gross domestic product.
On the negative side, tourism can cause unfortunate consequences if not appropriately managed by the local government. One such disadvantage is the rising prices of local goods and services, which harms the development of other sectors of the economy. For instance, after the Saudi Arabian government announced the start of the program “Saudi Vision 2030”, which designed to attract as many travelers as possible, prices for food and apartments in the country increased by 20 percent. This results in rising costs for domestic producers of public goods.
In conclusion, the advantages tourism brings to the country, such as high employment rate, must be weighed against the disadvantages, such as boost of the inflation. In my opinion, benefits of travelling business outweigh its drawbacks with the right government planning.
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first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9262947536 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4753771383 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171562995372 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588580534758 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060262645946 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102536708848 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047077786585 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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