All fathers should be off work when their baby is born. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, it is widely accepted that people change their minds more and more to be important personal life rather than work. In my opinion, I firmly believe that the workplace should have some policies in which parents can take care of their children officially, although all fathers do not need time off from the office. And the essay below will explain more about my opinion.
To begin with, the main reason is that children are an important value for our society, although parents have only responsibilities in law. To be a healthy society, kids have to learn essential factors such as cultures, manners, and histories. This is the example that if a single parents divorce, it could be a very hard time for working and taking care of their child. As a result, their children could be alone and not learn the necessary education, which would cause another problem in the future.
Secondly, there is another reason that single parents cannot focus on their work without solving taking care of children. It triggers decreasing work efficiency. For instance, certain single parents frequently worry for their children in the workplace where there is no policy for them. I believe that people cannot focus on work while worrying about the child.
In conclusion, all fathers should have eligibility for time off from the working place, although someone does not need it. For these reasons, it is clear that children are an important value and solving taking care of children helps work efficiently. Therefore, our society should make effort to create policies for fathers, although someone complains about this circumstance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to time'?
Suggestion: to time
...ially, although all fathers do not need time off from the office. And the essay belo...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...ance, certain single parents frequently worry for their children in the workplace where t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08118081181 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51632379854 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3127980452 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177833753787 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066993194101 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541431784725 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117990286156 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348412236045 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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