All over the world, the number of overweight people are growing. What do you feel are the major causes of this? What are the effects
Being overweight poses a major challenge in the world today as the number of overweight people grows over time. The need to enlighten the public to help reduce the growing figures is of utmost importance, hence the causes and the corresponding effects will therefore be analyzed.
Firstly, unhealthy eating and lack of exercise are some of the major causes of obesity. For instance, most young people today prefer to eat fast foods , snacks and junks. These foods are not nutrient dense but rather fattening. More also, having to exercise is seen as a Herculean task by young adults today. The benefits of exercise can not be over emphasized as this helps burn fat and keep the body fit. This therefore highlights the some of the reasons of the growing number of over weight people.
On the other hand, there are some effects of having too much weight on the health of an individual. Some examples are seen in the High blood pressure, heart disease and stroke. Overweight people may experience any of the above listed due to high amounts of cholesterol in the blood vessels. This could ultimately lead to death.
Summarily, it is important to enlighten and encourage the public to practice health living especially in lifestyle modifications. In this way, the number of overweight people may be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96363636364 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6192568682 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4585084691 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259996697638 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837609740088 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928428121929 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155687581003 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767526830322 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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