All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
With the Advent of 21st century, number of transformations get to see that were unimagined also five decades ago. These changes have affected positively and negatively. Obesity is one of them. People are conflicting this health issue and it is not just for a particular age group. This obstacle is emerging day by day owing to some factors. Such as, busy pace of life and high consumption of junk food. Bt this issue can be solved by adopting some approaches. Both reasons and solutions will be explained in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
To commence with, obesity has become a worldwide problem. Everyone suffering with this health hassel, whether they belong to any age group. First of all, due to having hectic schedule and busy pace of life, demos have not enough leisure time for exercise. As well as due to being exhausted from whole day work, inhabitants give preference to rest instead of doing exercise. Furthermore, they are being over weigh and they are becoming fatty. Secondly, every single person has become habitual to junk food. Eating outside is first priority of dwellers instead of cooking and eating at home that encourages obesity among people. Due to being much oily and it contains high level of calories as well.
To regulate this obstacle, some essential steps need to be taken. Such as, awareness: predominant solution of each and every problem is awareness. Authorities should organise some awareness campaigns for making demos conscious about repercussions of this disease. As well as governments should appeal to them for bringing a decrease in fast food and junk food consumption. Moreover, there should be a gym or exercise facility in every area, which should be available for free of cost for all. These all approaches would be helpful to get rid of this health problem.
In conclusion, although problem of over weigh and obesity is prevailing in every nation due to having carelessness amon people towards their health. But, this situation can be regulated by providing free exercise amenities and demos ought to be aware.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (amon) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06705539359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68901091335 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1046662448 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4166666667 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2916666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287405203208 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771260818134 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548369164953 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176560513749 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144032162936 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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