Scientific research should be the responsibility of government rather than commercial organisations. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the Advent of 21st century number of inventions came to see that were unimagined also five decades ago. Every sector is progressing day by day with spending time period and scince is also one of them. It is stated that new inventions are liability of authorities instead of local companies. I contradict this claim owing to some factors,which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
For bringing comfort in everyone's life, scientists are making new inventions day by day. These expolarations are capable to people's all needs. Therefore, a host of people argue that providing these facilities and taking care of inhabitant's convenienceness, are the responsibility of governments. Due to this, authorities ought to take responsibility of this exploration and should put all efforts. Instead of leaving on local companies.
In contrast, opponents of this statement believes that it seems impossible for some nations owing to low funding in developing countries. It is undeniable that these kind of inventions require huge amount of bucks and mostly progressing countries are not able to pay and projects on hold for a long time after starting. Because, basic essential needs are hardly accomplished by these governments therefore, some countries rely on local exploration commercials. For instance, in India, governments are busy to provide basic needed phenomenal to below poverty line demos. In these circumstances funding for inventions from government budgets can not be imagined.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that authorities shoul take care of people's requirements and investing in new phenomenal is their responsibility as well. But to my mind, most of the nations are not able to take this duty due to having economical issues and there is nothing bad if commercial organisations are helping nations by playing this role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3593220339 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18476335226 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2620720971 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152717341147 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446551433388 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430070476927 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089954582965 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224965716992 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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