Although families have influence on a children's development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
These days , some people hold the belief that children’s growing process is influenced by factors outside their home more than by their families in their lives. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the mentioned-above idea for the following reasons.
We all know that families will certainly make sense of their children because they live together in a long
time. In other words, parents will teach their children easier and have an impact on them.
Children spend most time with their family, that is the usual run of things. However, nowadays their family does not play a big part in their life like the past, it's the factors outside their home. Children tend to contact more with technology devices such as smartphones, computers than with their family in the 4.0 era. In detail, because children do not get much in touch with their parents, they will learn more things from social networks than from their home. Therefore, children usually do everything in imitation of people on the internet. On the other hand, there are many families that send their children to school. Due to their work being very busy, they do not have enough time to take care of and educate their children carefully. That is to say children’s teachers might affect them more in the way they behave.
In summary, with the discussed-above reasons, I totally agree with the idea of factors outside the home such as technology devices play a bigger role in children’s development than their home currently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in summary, such as, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98007968127 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54801460609 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6483368206 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366504396517 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137225842629 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845092969042 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200228341499 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727551697765 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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