Although there is a lot of translation software available learning a language still could be advantageous To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that after the advent of the internet, many language translator softwares are emerged in terms of convenience of people’s lives. I believe that the language learning is still preserving their importance against those softwares.
From an overall perspective, there are a variety of reasons why people believe language skills acquisition converse its essence. Perhaps the major cause is that most places of the world still lack of the internet access despite living in the 21st century. The highest percentage of those softwares in conjunction with the internet to provide more accurate translations, thus,if people urgently need any translation process in the regions where the internet access availability is limited, they do not complete their translation process. A good illustration of that most villages and some part high altitude regions do not possess the internet connection in Turkey. If there is no internet connection,which means that no translation.For that reason, language skills conserve their essence.
Another reason why people should learn a language is that the majority of language translation softwares do not obtain accurate translation due to distinguishing language accents. Many languages have their own differences in the same language, so the development of softwares are still inadequate against this argument. For example, words may have many distinct meanings in the same text and many authors use those different means of the same words in order to gain their text a rhetorical power. Translation softwares are more likely to use word by word translation and computers are unable to look at the whole text meaning to translate more accurate means.
In conclusion, In my opinion translation softwares still are insufficient in a number of situations and language learning is key to overcome many different issues simultaneously.

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Average: 7.3 (17 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49480968858 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06443925467 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9983796005 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223282009094 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092686104653 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674938490843 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157146057078 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283328663183 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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