Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives What problems do such feelings cause for people What remedies could you suggest
Some analytics think, many people feeling stress and they apologize, as they are incomplete control of theirs life.
Most of busy people reckon, that theirs lives in the planet, gives not enough pleasure or any kind of happiness as they feel pressure by their boss, or by their family, or by their weak and uncertain character.
Overall, as mentioned before, it depends on people's life and their lives, how they spend their spare time, how they feel themselves in that place where lives.
On the one hand, there are many examples where this kind of derangement happened in big cities, because of big cities have big problems. Also rational beings and citizens from another small down streets have meeting with another world, where everything going in fast way, hard and in some places in very under the necessity of performance any kind of conditions.
On the other hand, of course, many people could not endure that stressing period and they becoming nervous, weak and uncertain person, who could not standing against for his or her rights. Such kind of person is not interested in somebody's life, they became be self lover them are not so significant others feeling and pain.
This kind of greatest depressed people should go to the direction of psychologist, and do not fear, and find solutions to the issues and try to find the answer to the problem.
To conclude, I recommend them, that, they should come to an understanding with each other, for instance, with workers, family, or with their groupmates, if that people arrive from other town, and studying in that enormous city as a student, also being humane and have polite character in society, that is great way not being rude and be stressed in any situation.
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- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 61
- The diagrams below show tha changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: of the greatest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87074829932 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44079319565 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2125520768 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.111111111 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280553471034 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12561132489 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873464549703 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148377602076 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876203641988 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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