and give your opinion
people have divergent views about cycling. However, it is consider by some individuals that bicycle is a cheaper source of transportation while, others argue that driving a cycle has a number of drawbacks. In my opinion, I completely agree with former notion, but i will discuss both merits and demerits behind this trend in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost advantage of riding bicycle is that, it is not only safe for environment but also a cheaper mode of transportation. To elaborate, their is no need of petrol and diesel to ride this vehicle, and it does not emit toxic gases and chemicals that cause air pollution. Secondly, bicycle ride diminish traffic jams. because it contains a less place as compared to cars, and if people consider bicycle as a routine mode of transportation, it may reduces traffic jams. Hence, bicycle riding is totally environment friendly and cheaper way of transport to go anywhere to everywhere.
On the other hand, there also have some disadvantages to tour cycle, firstly, riding a bicycle is very uncomfortable. To explain, due to it's small seat one can unable to hold their body on it, especially a people who are over weighted. Moreover, it is a non-motorized vehicle, owing to this, it requires more physical labor. Despite this, bicycle is not a good choice as a reliable mode of transport, when weather is adverse. For instance, cycles do not have a sheds like cars, when it rains heavily. Apart from this, individuals who daily drive cycle for a long hours, can suffered from back as well as leg pain. Therefore, it is clear that, biking is not a convenient method of transportation.
To conclude, although, driving a bicycle has few drawbacks, it is benefits can not be neglected because in these days pollution is increasing day by day, and to reduce pollution, every people should start biking instead of other motor vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95950155763 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89862625079 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2263138105 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0152881897033 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0049193087182 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190524007405 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0130537837034 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226098166054 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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