Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there has been an increasingly popularised opinion that enterprises should be able to sell goods on the international market without any governmental restrictions. Although this practice seems beneficial to a certain extent, I believe that the government should apply several restricted policies for the following rationales.
On the one hand, opponents of governmental control on cross-national trading emphasize customer satisfaction. As goods and production flow freely to various countries, people have a greater number of choices, ranging from Europe to Asia. Moreover, if there are any complaints about these products, the customers can receive compensation and an apology for the mistake. For instance, Toyota is one of the leading companies specializing in car manufacturing. Years ago, the engine in one product line did not work properly, they immediately recalled all the products, repaired it, and let customers own it for free. They always try to enhance customer service in order to avoid any potential collapse.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned virtues of the freedom to trade internationally, there is an ethical issue related to its adverse effect on domestic firms, which justifies the existence of policies on cross-border trading. Once multinational giants break into the domestic market, small businesses might disappear, which can lead to another miserable situation. Businesses with 500 employees account for 44% of the US economic activities, according to one recent report, and they employ almost half of the American workers. It means that if those go out of business, thousands of workers can be made redundant. The nation’s overall economy and living standards of the general public can be enormously affected.
In conclusion, while there are several advantages relating to financial institutions selling goods freely, they should adhere to the trading policies introduced by the government. It is recommended that the authority impose import taxes to restrict multinational trade.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...all economy and living standards of the general public can be enormously affected. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68954248366 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1602996893 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1281642399 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148830626832 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452776651438 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608059912096 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105166606305 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858537599113 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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