Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas.
Why is this?
What problems does this cause?
living in city neighbors is being emphasized by people nowadays, major population show grater enthusiasm to live in urban areas rather than rural as well. This is mainly because there are considerable number of job opportunities as well as better transportation system in cities. Despite many more advantages further to what said before, this issue is followed by some problems also which is going to be extended in detail in this essay.
variety of job position and higher minimum wages are strong enough reasons to push a big population every day ,start living in big cities, the more number of habitants is exceeding the more traffic and relevant pollutions will be vivid.
further more gathering different types of back grounds and customs also habits will ends up in cultural inconsistency and disorders which has to be treated by related specialists in order to maintain proper solutions to this issue
in conclusion , living in developed and modern urban neighbors is a globally preferred taste and in spite of many difficulties people face followed by living in big cities , they insist on it and there fore the majority of governors and related researchers and developers should prioritize the encountered disorders and plan practical solutions for them to improve the quality of life in different aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19248826291 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81898838435 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.004583279 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.2 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.2 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262723879628 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13611642165 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552364242428 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141497865564 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833219216798 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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