Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. why is this? What problems does this cause?
In the current day and time, many people have chosen to live in the cities instead of countrysides. While high-quality lifestyle might be the main reason, there are certain issues relating to production of sufficient food resources for the population.
There is no doubt that living in the urban sprawl offers a lot of conveniences. There are many job opportunities which help people to make more money and improve their life conditions. Also, various state-of-art buildings and up-to-date technologies serve to achieve easier yet more productive working conditions. Furthermore, there are a lot of recreational places for people to go out with their friends and socialise.
However, the majority of population dwelling in city centers might be burden to agriculturists. They will face challenges to produce sufficient cattle and crop to provide the basic needs of the population. This will make governments to consider alternative ways of sustaining food resources. Additionally, the more people live in the certain area the more damage they cause to the surrounding environment. High rates of exhaust fumes, pollutants of the water and nature can be a good example of this.
To conclude, cities has become overcrowded with people who came there to improve their lifestyles. However, this might result in food shortage and increased rates of environmental pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'producing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: producing
...riculturists. They will face challenges to produce sufficient cattle and crop to provide t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43457943925 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10888170047 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1701361072 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4615384615 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225767621398 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722557457754 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788424018722 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117524038792 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618615621885 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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