Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that artists require much freedom to enhance their imaginative thoughts. Although some people believe that artists should express their opinions without any limitation, In my opinion, I agree with the idea of full freedom expression of their point of views.
If artists are allowed to explain their views liberty on societies, they are more likely to create lots of gorgeous art of works. Not only will it help make durable artistic products, but they also impress on almost people directly who like to follow their ideas. For instance, the directors have some super ideas which illustrated some historic civilization mixing with the number of modern science fiction novel which is not popular among the masses, but these sorts of the film have been examined extraordinarily science theory by mixing history and fiction. These sorts of art help societies to understand a complicated scientific subject and their historical civilizations.
However, sometimes, artistic workers have some unsuitable ideas which have an adverse impact on society. These contents may contain negative advertising for various types of age. For example, sex and violent movies can misunderstand young people who are not equipped with cognition abilities to form faulty behavior patterns. In contrast, if the government control the artistic ideas, it can be less negative impress on the almost audiences who directly face these model of movies.
To conclude, the artist should be full of freedom in expressing their ideas but the government should control them for the useful production and protect the people from negative consequences of their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40310077519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68355925872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5352161696 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291405024978 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110672554577 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887154578662 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198487353646 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892736244518 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.