The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well
as the prevalence of online shopping in these countries
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the figures for internet costumes in five European countries in 2004, 2000, and 2004. The pie chart shows the proportion of sales online in Germany, Switzerland, and France in 2004.
It is clear that the figure for the internet user in the UK was the biggest in 1995, with 16 million people shopping online while it increased dramatically to 42 million by 2004, in 1995. The number of internet users in Switzerland, France, and Spain shows a slight increase from 1 to 4, 2 to 6 and 0.5 to 2 respectively. In contrast, the figure for Germany user witnessed a dramatic increase from 5 to 314 between 1995 and 2000, after which it dropped to 15 in 2004.
It is an interesting notice that the percentage of online selling in France was the biggest in three Europe in 2004, with about 45% of users choosing shopping online While there are approximately 22% of selling online covered by German in 2004. Switzerland represents about 33% of internet shopping in Europe (2004).
To conclude, the number of UK internet user saw a stable increase and the percentage of online shopping in France was the largest in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
... 2004, with about 45% of users choosing shopping online While there are approximately 22...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72528921511 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5479146038 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173135539416 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921443958581 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354805261589 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122163257155 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261824350167 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.