The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school programs?
Arts, music and theatre are more crucial things in human life although it is debatable in modern society, some people believe that it’s still alive on our society or others not also some people questioned that the art also included in school programs? In this essay I will describe the importance of arts in human life and how it’s important in student’s career.
First of all, arts are still in our society while people gathered, they do different arts in their society. If any occasion on society, people will dancing together with loud music in a cool environment. In addition, while people feel alone they watch movie to entertain themselves .For instance, last week , in our society all people together and watch a film together in a big projector. So, it can clearly shows that the importance of arts in human life in modern society also.
Furthermore, in modern lifestyle it’s more important in individual life, arts is a medicine for stress reduce. While people feel bore in home they get together and watch movie .While people feel stress they will listen a music which feel relax them. For example, when I feel alone in my home I will listen music with volume which make me relax. Therefore arts will be the medicine for stress.
Second of all, in a school arts is more valuable to student life because its helps to children mind creative. While students draw a picture they think about background and its trend to student mind creative. While student study all academic they feel uncreative in that case arts helps to student enjoyable in school such as while last period is dancing class student are relax before go to home and they can study at home with concentration.
Some of students are keen on arts rather than academic who can make their future by arts. All people are not made for academic degree some people find their destiny by arts like music, drawing and acting. For instance one survey of oxford university shows that children who are not good in academic they had special knowledge about arts. So, arts should study in school programs which helps student to make their better future.
In conclusion, in modern society arts importance is more rather than past people can utilize the time to feel relax and students can grow their knowledge in school by learning arts and make a profession .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'dance'
Suggestion: dance
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Suggestion: .
...they watch movie to entertain themselves .For instance, last week , in our society...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tain themselves .For instance, last week , in our society all people together and ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
... in a big projector. So, it can clearly shows that the importance of arts in human li...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...of arts in human life in modern society also. Furthermore, in modern lifestyle it...
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Suggestion: While
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...home they get together and watch movie .While people feel stress they will listen a m...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... music with volume which make me relax. Therefore arts will be the medicine for stress. ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the students') or simply say ''Some students''.
Suggestion: Some of the students; Some students
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Suggestion: .
...l by learning arts and make a profession .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83790523691 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34793220121 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451371571072 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5956799899 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304830368938 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122962530986 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915030353542 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181782440299 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618326913911 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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