In present times, people are highly influenced by the corporate world, but at the same time, they are much aware of the importance of health in our lifestyle. Many individuals had the notion that in the upcoming period, people would be in a space where their health standards would be comparatively lower than in recent times. In my opinion, I am highly opposed to this claim. In this essay, I will highlight the key ideas supporting my position.
To begin with, there are many young as well as middle-aged people living a sedentary lifestyle, involving themselves surrounding persistent stress from work or because of competitive examinations. Consequently, many individuals are not managing time for uplifting their health; however, I believe people are getting constant motivation from social media. Many apps are recently providing easy workout video series to make people involve themselves in a healthy regime. Fitness channels on Instagram, for instance, are reaching wider audiences. Owing to this, in the future popularity for these channels would increase leading to promoting a healthy lifestyle. Furthermore, in the future, many more trustworthy apps would come up with engaging UI and content which would promote a healthy lifestyle as well as would remind people to follow the routine to stay fit.
Moreover, another key reason why in the future people would be comparatively healthier is ever-increasing research on diet plans which are easily accessible by the inhabitants on online platforms, especially the ones with extremely good responses. Consequently, people would make efforts to follow those diets to be in good shape, which would ultimately improve their health.
In conclusion, it is apparent from the above postulation that in the future, the average standard of an individual's health would surely be climbed owing to the growth of popular online training sessions on social media and highly researched articles related to easily accessible diet plans.
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 67
- These days more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o 64
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 73
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... the future, the average standard of an individuals health would surely be climbed owing to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39871382637 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90894263442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9251241089 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164239500124 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607053933972 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320608400465 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102451417029 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160595169098 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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