Social Media has grown immensely in the last 10 years and has become an integral part of our life. Owing to its popularity, a lot of people had made their midset that Social Media such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and many more had a detrimental effect on individuals as well as society. I concur that it is affecting the lives of teenagers, kids, and even older people, along with also harming our diverse society.
To begin with, social media is affecting society in broader aspects. There are many people who spend long hours on these social networking sites without taking any action to improve themselves. Due to this, people are unable to develop the essential social behavior and prove nothing to their community. Instead, they are wasting their time, on these sites, blindly following an influencer which they would rarely meet in their whole life. For instance, there are many kids which are highly influenced in gaming, following the influencers on these sites. These kids have changed their way of living by spending most of their time playing computer or mobile games rather than involved in some physical sports, which is highly affecting their education, health as well as they lack most of the social skills, which indeed affects society, especially the one with local communities.
Moreover, the dramatic increase in the demand for social media had created a way for fraudsters, to spread their curated news easily on the daily basis. Following certain sophisticated tactics, they tend to gain people's beliefs and make it so much appealing that they tend to believe or form opinions related to whatever they have seen on these sites. As a result, false or misleading information presented as news is spreading more and more, which may affect individuals and also society. To illustrate, there was a celebrity Ranbir Kapoor, on which the fake allegation of dealing with drugs was put on which had a huge impact on his professional as well as personal life. Later on, after investigation, it was cleared that the news which was spread was entirely false. As stated, these sites had highly affected our society and our beliefs.
In Conclusion, it is apparent that social media is growing rapidly, and with technological advances, it will continue to flourish, but at the same time it is deteriorating society and our own lives. To mitigate such an impact, it's highly difficult and challenging. Fraud news on these sites is spreading almost daily. People are wasting a lot of time perpetually strolling on this platform, affecting their own life, causing them not involved in social activities in their society.
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 67
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 73
- These days more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o 64
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04816513761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62871153956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534403669725 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7302186542 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.842105263 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184390713375 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615293874487 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526497120994 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119668480438 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168853024227 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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