The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A person's health is his most valued treasure, it is believed that the degree of personal health will be lower than it is today. However, i totally disagree, as people nowadays, are becoming more aware of what they put in their mouths and the level medical services as well the sophistication of hospital equipment is on exponential rise.
Food is considered as the most important aspects when considering a person's well being. More and more individuals are gaining awareness when it comes to their diet, through the use of internet or diet oriented apps. Keeping a certain diet helps an adult, keep fit and minimize the treat of any food related diseases such as diabetes cholesterol and various heart diseases. In order to avoid these consequences most people are converting to a plant based diet as it is more beneficial for the person's health. This trend is now hugely followed in the west.
Not only the behavior of the community is changing, technology is also updating, medical science is evolving at faster rate than ever for instance, in the past, presence of cancer was difficult to locate due to limitations of the equipment and would be located in the later stages when it has become more prominent but now with advancements, the cancer cells are located at a very early stage, with proper treatment a person life can be saved. Moreover a brain surgery which is a sophisticated task can now be done with a use of a robot which has more precision and less chances of error.
in a nutshell, the standard of a person health will increase as the time passes due to the awareness of individuals and the advancements in science and technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
A persons health is his most valued treasure, it ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...most important aspects when considering a persons well being. More and more individuals a...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...d diet as it is more beneficial for the persons health. This trend is now hugely follow...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...r treatment a person life can be saved. Moreover a brain surgery which is a sophisticate...
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Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...of a robot which has more precision and less chances of error. in a nutshell, the...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...precision and less chances of error. in a nutshell, the standard of a person he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8041958042 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74235563897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.892296078 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.4 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128832347968 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502495983028 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346819800921 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749435538697 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235430810796 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.