On balance, advertising is more harmful than beneficial.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, advertising is a trendy way to sell products. Some people think that advertising would not bring any good result and also harmful, but others believe that this would be a magnificent method to vend items. In my opinion, I disagree with the give statement and I will explain my viewpoint in this essay.
Mostly, publicizing is the most common way to attract customers approach the finished goods of many companies and corporations. In fact, there are a huge amount of posters and leaflets stick on the wall of many buildings where the pedestrian could see immediately, and they also appear on the internet. These activities will make the consumers get closer in approaching their products so that they could make more money. For instance, when we watch Youtube, we could see the advertisement in the top of the right corner of the website; maybe there are some items which we dream to have and then we buy it online .Secondly, promoting could easily make a lot of corporations compete to each other. This would promote all the companies to produce more unique goods and lead to the development of the country’s economy. For example, I wanted to buy a phone and I went to a phone store. At there, I saw a variety kinds of phones; I chose Samsung A50 because of its beauty and its slight shape, so other phone’s firm should create the phone that have more functions and more attractive than A50 to catch the attention of the guests.
Nevertheless, the accurateness and the quality of these advertisement is still not clear in some products, medicine specifically. For example, the advertisement said that you will lose weight if you drink the pink tablet. Some people did drink it. Consequently, they are not lose weight, but they first go to the hospital because of CKD which means the chronic kidney disease. That is super hazardous.
In conclusion, promotion would bring more advantages than the drawbacks. It could make people pay more attention to the products which they sell. But, the quality of the goods should be verified precisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... dream to have and then we buy it online .Secondly, promoting could easily make a ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...ream to have and then we buy it online .Secondly, promoting could easily make a lot of c...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'these advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; these advertisements
...ss, the accurateness and the quality of these advertisement is still not clear in some products, me...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lost'.
Suggestion: lost
...id drink it. Consequently, they are not lose weight, but they first go to the hospit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88319088319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74686133572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0374239203 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120452631165 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363795621925 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039371280611 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771548976839 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109132310365 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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