Being famous has advantages and disadvantages , discuss and give your opinion
It’s believed by many people that being famous could have many pros and cons. In my opinion, I think that the fame can hold more benefits than drawbacks. This essay will discuss both sides before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, the life of well-known figures, such as actors, singers as well as sport players has many good aspects. Firstly, they are very rich , and thus they have easier life than other people. They have gorgeous houses, for instance, and they can afford the best clothes and drive the latest models of cars. In addition to that, they can spend wonderful holidays in expensive resorts and they can get the best rooms and the most efficient services. On top of that, I can also add that they are beloved by many people who consider them as a role model. To be more precise, many young people and fans imitate them and admire the way they live, think, and dress.
However, on the other hand, if celebrities are not capable of preserving their private life, they will be exposed to many hazards. In other words, famous people are always followed by paparazzi who don’t give any concerns to their privacy. They can shoot them, for example, all the time and without their permission. Furthermore, they are likely to be misused by the press and the misleading media which can be harmful to their successful history. Take for example, the wrong news that can be published with their names then the rumors that spread about them like the wind.
All in all, I believe that celebrities can obtain many splendid benefits. However, fame is not an easy life to lead. It can be turned out to a terrifying nightmare if it’s not safely secured and kept away from spotlights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73244147157 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32283351869 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7504163535 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2352941176 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105774300055 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367365206979 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389132424138 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765878252323 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055594493546 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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