Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The Internet has brought a myriad of benefits to humans in today’s world. However, some people say that many problems have also occurred due to the advent of the Internet. In my opinion, I completely agree with this belief.
To begin with, a large number of online users are exposed to scams and annoying advertisements. When using the Internet, even with the maximum security, individuals’ personal credentials such as email addresses and bank account numbers are still in a great danger of being hacked or shared with others. This private information will be used for phishing activities and making fraudulent online purchases or transactions. Indeed, the US government has reported that over 20 percent of online shoppers got their credit card numbers stolen by cybercriminals in 2017. Furthermore, the internet has become a tool for companies to annoyingly promote or introduce their products. These days, online advertising is extremely disturbing and pops up even more frequently compared to television commercials.
Besides adults, children are also negatively affected by excessive use of the Internet and inappropriate online contents. Research shows that an enormous number of young people are facing physical health problems due to long-time exposure to the Internet. In fact, more and more children have eye-related diseases and serious obesity after a long period of using computers and other gadgets to browse the Internet. In addition, youngsters are influenced by bad online videos and footage and negatively change their behaviors. For example, many young criminals admit that they have adapted their misconceptions from watching youtube videos and committed crimes.
In conclusion, I assert that the Internet has created many severe problems for both adults and the young despite its merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ree with this belief. To begin with, a large number of online users are exposed to scams and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53928571429 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95439615364 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1489528847 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161491697413 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548080612548 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480828124949 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113285602772 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571180877559 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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