Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the number of vehicles is increasing, so do the problems associated with the environment, such as global warming. That is why it is regarded by some people that raising fuel prices of domestic and commercial vehicles can be one of the best solutions to tackle these issues. I agree with this because of the following reasons.
Increasing the price of petrol and diesel for cars can reduce carbon emissions to a greater extent. Having to pay extra money for such fuels, many people will start using public transportation and thereby able to massively minimise the emissions. This is because greenhouse gas emissions from household vehicles constitute about 25% of the whole carbon dioxide found in the atmosphere every year. If the public use buses and local trains to commute as a result of the rise in fuel costs, this portion of gas being emitted can easily be reduced.
Another point to be considered is that raising the fuel price of other vehicles, such as trucks and vans that are mainly used for commercial service also be able to solve the environmental problems. More precisely, the lower people maintain a vehicle, the more it consumes the fuel and the higher it emits the harmful gases. As the prices are increased, the owners of the vehicles will take necessary steps to service their vehicles once in every three to four months, resulting in cutting emissions.
In conclusion, carbon emissions from vehicles add up to a large portion of greenhouse gases that affects the environment. Increasing the price of fuels for automobiles is one of the best ways to curb the effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86798679868 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65202824654 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5153033672 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330993113165 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126461499993 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118838654007 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217289467001 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122582452596 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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