Big and small city negative and positive parts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...group believed that the rural areas are more healthier than to decorate accommodation I still ...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
...n academic facilities and a spectacular opportunities to continue study life not only these a...
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Line 11, column 222, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ides to experience big city life is not have to update with these ambient on twice i...
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Line 11, column 357, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: real
...ic rate and IR law become a become many real real person Ive served to mother and big-cit...
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Line 11, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...w become a become many real real person Ive served to mother and big-city Alive sky...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52074724371 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 100.0 20.2975951904 493% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 214.023363211 49.4020404114 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 490.0 106.682146367 459% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 100.0 20.7667163134 482% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 7.06120827912 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294038220028 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163733121802 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13463400805 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163733121802 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13463400805 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.6 13.0946893788 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.02 50.2224549098 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.3 11.3001002004 374% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.02 8.58950901804 152% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.0 10.1190380762 415% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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