Some famous persons by many things without any attention to low come people opportunities, what you can agree with?
Nowadays there are many famous persons that known as celebrities with high income and Royal lifestyle. some people hold the view that they purchase too and don't have any attention to Ordinary People, another disagree with them. Actually I agree with this opinion and this essay will put forth two main reasons and solutions to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
First special persons like singers, actors or even musicians have a different lifestyl. For example since1800 to 2000 according to a questionary results from various parts of the world, the famous people rate was so low and they didn't know from their country's social. In modern life follow high tech facilities and advices invitations like the internet and laptop, through International advertisement some artist known from anothers. as a result the self-confidence, argue feel and spectacular resome raised between them and earn high range of salary to do many activities and made luxury lifestyle without any help to ordinary people who they were main reasons for their successed. Secondly, on the other hand the government dedicate more budget to their display Program in city with expensive entery so lead to drop public Society activities. For example most of factories and companies display to famous people's as a sponsors but not to low income people. In consequences, different life skills lead to social division. Although the government hope would be able to change this annoying problem.
There are two solutions to resolve. At the first, the government should to arrange Society programs. For example establishe Arts Sciences Association to decorate and organiz many free programs with low cost like unique events with this title "celebrity and people day". As a result they force to care many people that come there to take photo or take signatures.Otherwise all of the Normal Society rules have to play to everyone (ordinary and famous) person without any different bonuses. For instance medicine, vehicle insurance and transportation bills. That led to have better and much more discipline than another Societies.
In conclusion the government play important role in Modern Life that's growing every day. Otherwise the famous people have to meet with another people to keep this connection and preserve same Humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33152173913 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78613058371 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.283168122 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.263157895 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260837842426 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660047076357 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678836250045 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162911638627 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444035647381 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.