Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or Disagree?
Some people think that choosing a job with high wage is more necessary than those making one feel content/satisfied. I disagree as job satisfaction could support career growth and lead to fulfilled life.
Job satisfaction could help people reach their potential, leading to career growth. This is because, when workers enjoy and share pride in what they do, they become motivated to work harder and improve their skills, increasing their productivity. As their competencies in the field increase, they can achieve their targets at work, having a better chance at getting a promotion, and eventually be paid well for their hard work. For example, Prita Ghozie resigned her everyday job at marketing agency despite high wage in order to pursue her passion in finance education, and five years after starting her career as junior advisor, she became a Director of a well-established finance company.
In addition, job satisfaction could also help people obtain a content and fulfilled life. A fat paycheck usually comes with high responsibility and pressure, and when employees do not share the passion with job itself, they are likely to experience burnout and stress, affecting their quality of life. A survey conducted by The Creative Economy Agency in Indonesia reported that 67% of art workers such as painters, dancers, and writers had a happy life despite the low salary that they get, because they have a chance to do what they love.
To conclude, I believe that it is better for workers to choose a job that brings satisfaction, rather than looking for a big salary. It’s important for workers to focus on their purpose in life and improving their competencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13503649635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82911694914 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7743159873 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167687642204 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726766753325 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468075481722 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115588578442 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523256976428 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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