Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

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Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

The budgetary allocation to the prevention of animals and their habit from the threat expensed by not only government but also citizens. However, it is more essential to spend money on tackling society's problems. From my perspective, I partly agree with this idea which is illustrated below.
There are several benefits when ensuring the safety of wildlife. Firstly, a handful number of rare animals would be on the edge of extinction; therefore, unless the construction of wildlife sanctuaries is given financial aid by authorities, the existence of some kind of endangered animals would be assured because overfishing and poaching may be underused. Secondly, the reliance on animal behaviours may help scientists to define the best method for preservation of the natural habitat. For example, some kinds of crocodiles have abilities to make predictions about the unprecedented events such as earthquakes, tsunami or hail.
Apart from the statement mentioned above, the quality of human life is also especially important in social development. Firstly, living below poverty lines is a major problem in some underdeveloped countries. This is because mortality rates is extremely increasing due to annual starvation without any financial support from local authorities. Secondly, a real shortage of healthcare services has tremendous impacts on citizens' health conditions. For instance, the outbreak of epidemic in African countries might be the culprit of insufficient professional doctors, hospitals, and infirmaries. Therefore, spending money on these fields is fundamentally paramount.
In conclusion, in my opinion, both wildlife and human life are equally crucial in society; therefore, national budgets should be allocated proportionately to these sections.

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... a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^
Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a...
^
Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a...
^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a...
^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a...
^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a...
^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a...
^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a...
^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a...
^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a ...
^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
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Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
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Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a a'.
Suggestion: a a
...a a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...a a a F a a a a a a a a F a a a a a a a a
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43860267263 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5537858957 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 189.0 5.01903807615 3766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190471990041 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523649126162 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476869098478 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834323507898 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574871982733 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.