Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being bullied in a school with children and teenager is a terrible scene. Become a massive barrel for many children from many school to communicate with other. Many causes have been explained, either solutions. The essay below is my opinion about the cause of bullying and the solution for that.
Unfortunately, Bullying should not be appearing in a school, the place belong to education. The first thing cause of this is student's special above of their intelligent, their hair color or skin, the country where they come from... This cause with my opinion is most common. The reason to explain is that when you in a group, a class and you are the one stood out you may raise other kid's jealous inside them and become a target of bullier. For example, America of 1980s, Asian children were not be welcome to America university because of their intelligent. The second thing is the take care of teacher is low. Many of bullying become more and more serious because of the badly manage on teacher's student. For instance, the highest population country in the world is China. This mean lead to that, there are a huge number of student in one class. Too much student make teacher hardly in manage student and then bullying appeared.
Many solution have been found, many of them work while the other not. The first solution in my opinion is that, School should create more sociable activities in order to help children to connect and communicate easier. For example, In Vietnam, many of summer camp had been organized in many school. This activity helps reduce a lot of bully. Students stay in a positive environment make them busy to connect with other friends...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
...a massive barrel for many children from many school to communicate with other. Many causes ...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t. Unfortunately, Bullying should not be appearing in a school, the place belong to educat...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ood out you may raise other kids jealous inside them and become a target of bulli...
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Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...erica of 1980s, Asian children were not be welcome to America university because o...
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Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
... serious because of the badly manage on teachers student. For instance, the highest popu...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many solutions'.
Suggestion: Many solutions
...e student and then bullying appeared. Many solution have been found, many of them work whil...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
...ny of summer camp had been organized in many school. This activity helps reduce a lot of bu...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun bully seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of bullies'.
Suggestion: a lot of bullies
...many school. This activity helps reduce a lot of bully. Students stay in a positive environmen...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em busy to connect with other friends...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78745644599 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42107381484 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6480891852 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3157894737 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194325369205 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597593722853 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396327617562 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141353175071 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030652673395 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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