Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the present-day, bullying tends to be a significant phenomenon in a lot of schools. This state of affair can be attributed with a number of factors, and some of viable solutions that can downplay the situation will be mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, this problem can arise from the lack of attention or care of teachers and parents. In the growing process, every child virtually possesses a crisis emotion period, which barely can constitute as a significant change not only in mental aspect but also cognitive of each child, such of a period is a time when parent or responsible person's present plays an important role in maintaining a sustainable growing of child's emotion. Without the initial interceptions, the child could totally fall into a chaos of emotion, creating a isolative felling, forcing them to have bad actions to their schoolmate.
In the other hand, there are several ways to handle the problems, one of them must be the changing in the way the concerning about bullying's perspective. Nowadays, although bullying is always mentioned as a constraint of developing better educational environment, it is still not actually considered as a main problem of some schools. So in order to remedy this situation, government should allocate expenditure for academic teaching course about bullying for teachers to make sure they have brief judgment on the situation, and further is making proper actions.
In conclusion, bullying can arise from the in the inadequate of attention of parents and school to the child, this can lead to host of disadvantages. However, such of problem can still be settled by the accurate thinking of parents and teachers about bullying, supporting them to have crucial action to remedy the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... fall into a chaos of emotion, creating a isolative felling, forcing them to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93347504656 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6490945985 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131334988931 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573970187995 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440978618719 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855737226663 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317987019123 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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