buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, purchase stuffs online become the tendency, for instance people can buy as books, air tickets and groceries on the internet. Personally, I believe the shopping online has more outweighs pros than the cons. This essay, will discuss about the reason, why do I think it’s beneficial to trades things on the network.
To begin with, online shopping enables consumers to get a service or product from home or everywhere. They no longer need to spend a lot time waiting the payment, which always occurs when you go shopping in the supermarket or clothes shop, specially on the Black Friday or similar days. Base on the development of the hand-held smart devices and the widespread of the Internet, everything you need to buy somethings is a few finger taps, after that it will be delivered your order to your door. Furthermore, buying through the network you will be provided the diversity products, so you not only can order this in your places but also find these things in other places, these items have the variety of shape or material, accompany by the affordability price. In addition, the purchase on the internet it is the optimal solution for people who are up to their eyes in work due to their time is limited. Finally, some people don’t like that the salesclerk follow them and give them the advice, therefore, they will fell comfortable while purchase online.
In contrast, the online shopping may inconvenient for some people, who need to go the store to try on stuffs. Actually, the digital scams increasingly expanding, it is one of the reasons make some people afraid of trading on the internet. They think that their personal information will be stolen by the technology crimes, then abuse its to the illegal behavior.
Overall, the potential advantages of shopping online, largely outweigh than the disadvantages. In fact, there are some downsides of buying things on the Internet such as the lost information or the products doesn’t as if the introduction on the website, however, it’s still the greatness form of shopping, not only save time but also convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96338028169 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6964971731 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6655922744 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233806463143 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730159775311 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047964521367 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139218145748 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744469511632 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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