Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, everybody tends to do everything at home. Thus, online shopping is gaining popularity nowadays. In this essay, I will show the advantages of shopping on the internet outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first discuss the benefits it can bring to buyers, followed by the problems it can cause.
On the one hand, E-commerce helps people to buy goods whenever they want and this process is extremely quick. Thus, customer can save their time doing other activities. Moreover, they don't need to go out because shippers will deliver them to your home. For example, I purchased a book last night and this morning, I got it. In addition, customers can buy everything from all over the world through apps, such as Amazon.
On the other hand, E-commerce is superb good, on the contrary, it has several issues. One of the major problems related to this is that there are a plethora of counterfeits which supremely hard to be recognised. However, there are numerous policies to protect consumers like refunds or exchanges. For instance, Shopee has a 14-day return policy and if clients are not satisfied, they will be refunded.
In conclusion, There are more advantages than disadvantages. In modern society, convenience is getting more and more attention, online shopping is a good choice for shoppers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08796296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75443510051 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.565066413 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2065283949 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643017923537 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640758656362 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115747053405 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062289063141 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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