Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Today, due to technological development, everyone's life has been made easier, even youngsters. More and more people prefer working or learning when sitting at home. In my opinion, this trend is a positive development despite the drawbacks it can bring.
To begin with, it is undeniable that one advantage of working and studying from home is that parents and their children could have more time to spend with other family members. More specifically, when working at the office, parents usually work half a day, thus they have little time to meet and teach their children. In contrast, if members of the family work and learn online, they could gather more frequently, minimizing the gap between them. Additionally, this tendency could protect our environment because of the decrease in emissions from vehicles such as cars or buses. For example, during the Covid 19 pandemic, when people must work and study online, the concentration of CO2 in the air dropped and the ozone layer recovered significantly.
To be fair, this trend has some disadvantages, one of them is distractions when working or studying. As a result, their performance in work can see a dramatic drop, and children's understanding of the lesson has decreased. For example, due to the outbreak of Covid 19, Vietnamese students must study from home through video communications applications like Zoom or Google meet. However, they are often appealed by surfing the Internet or playing games thus they don't pay attention to the lecture, leading to an increased number of poor performances in the exam.
To conclude, although there are some drawbacks to working and studying from home, I still believe that this is a positive development since it not only increases the closeness between families but also reduces pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17869415808 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89002414895 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8082407437 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294634811461 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987742692075 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855552708041 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171884076092 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534821774657 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.